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Hulk Geo - amended by *Jam-Wah:iconJam-Wah:

Categories Cartoons & Comics > Digital Media > Comics > Vector

©2009 *Jam-Wah
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On suggestions from others, I've added some "choppaaaahs" to the dead space and because it was bugging me, I toned down the texture a little. Just a quick change.

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*daneault Jun 10, 2009, 7:25:33 AM
Very nice!!! The only thing I could think to mention is that I'd like to see some definition in the teeth. His molars I think should be slightly darker than his front teeth, just to give some depth to his mouth. I love the use of texture in this piece. It really helps to give what would otherwise be a flat, but nifty, piece some visual interest.

I have 33 words left. I hate this 100 word minimum. I think this and your Wolvie piece would make great POP art-style prints. Do them up in 24"x36" Panels, and I could see them adorning my wall. ;)
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*Chadfuller Jun 10, 2009, 10:24:01 AM
your welcome bro!=D awesome Hulk!
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~editwilson Jun 10, 2009, 11:40:15 AM
thats class. I'm liking the colour palette and the upcloseness of crop. Prefer it a lot more to the xavier. "Choppaaagghhhs nooooww" in the background is a nice touch and lends some depth to the piece so does that mouth its spot on (Rocky "Yo Adrianne esque"). The thing I'm not sure about is the left hand side (right hand side of his face) the furthest back bit of his face its going in the wrong direction think it should taper inwards towards the right and the right eye looks a bit off as well. Dont know how to post this as a critique. Feel like a bit of a dick for knocking it cause its awesome. Just trying to give a thorough critique.

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Nice.... like Eggs.
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~Nass Jun 10, 2009, 1:29:23 PM
Fantastic work! Texture and colors all look great to me! Perfect amount of minimalist background details with the choppers...This is top notch!
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*Jam-Wah Jun 11, 2009, 2:35:18 AM
Nice one, cheers Ed!

His left cheek/side of jaw/neck is not exactly true to real anatomy, yeah. When I draw Hulk I tend to try and have his head turn into his neck which turns into his shoulders! I don't know why, but I always do. I think it might be a bit OTT here, but I also wanted it to go right into the bottom left corner. More design-driven than illustrative, maybe. I dunno, maybe I'm making excuses.

The eye was based on how Bryan Hitch draws Hulk in The Ultimates, one normal eye and one crazy one. Looks like he's popped it out a little here, though! Good eye (pun intended)!
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*Jam-Wah Jun 11, 2009, 2:35:42 AM
Thanks very muchly, budski!
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~cassius335 Jun 11, 2009, 3:01:57 AM
Very nice. What about colour swaps for Fixit and Rulk?

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*Jam-Wah Jun 11, 2009, 3:53:00 AM
Yeah, good idea. I'll finalise the pic, then post alternate versions.
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