On suggestions from others, I've added some "choppaaaahs" to the dead space and because it was bugging me, I toned down the texture a little. Just a quick change.
Very nice!!! The only thing I could think to mention is that I'd like to see some definition in the teeth. His molars I think should be slightly darker than his front teeth, just to give some depth to his mouth. I love the use of texture in this piece. It really helps to give what would otherwise be a flat, but nifty, piece some visual interest.
I have 33 words left. I hate this 100 word minimum. I think this and your Wolvie piece would make great POP art-style prints. Do them up in 24"x36" Panels, and I could see them adorning my wall.
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I moderate a blog called "Kirby-Vision" which is dedicated to artwork inspired by the work of Jack Kirby. I would like, with your permission, to add this illustration to the project. I will provide a link to your deviant page along with a short bio with the posting. If you have chance please take a look at the blog to see what it's all about.
I have 33 words left. I hate this 100 word minimum. I think this and your Wolvie piece would make great POP art-style prints. Do them up in 24"x36" Panels, and I could see them adorning my wall.
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